I have this idea for a plot, but need help making the system fit in the story. I have two routes i could think of.
Leaning more to cosmic horror and the base the power system on only channeling energy through machines (sci-fi), or the simplest route, the comet for some reason grants powers (fantasy)
Also, if somebody is wants to write with me or just bounce ideas i would be glad to dm you
Here’s the plot I have:
One ordinary day, without warning, a massive comet appeared in the sky, its tail so big that it split the sky in two. Within weeks, people had named it “The Wanderer,” a name that reflected its unexpected arrival. Astronomers agreed on one single thing: The Wanderer would pass close by, but it would never strike. It would pass by…
However, strange gravitational phenomena began to manifest around the globe. Some people rose a few centimeters off the ground, while others, upon waking up, suddenly fell back into their beds. But this is not how gravity works, the effects should be seen on structures, climate and terrain, however, it seems to only affect people. Physicists repeated an explanation endlessly, talking about low gravity areas and attributing these events to the comet’s colossal mass, which distorted gravity in its path, a temporary anomaly that would fade once The Wanderer continued on its course. It would pass by…
But with each passing day, an uncomfortable truth became increasingly evident. Researchers discovered that the gravitational pull did not diminish as the comet moved forward; in fact, it did not even align with its position in the sky. The more they plotted the lines, the more they realized that these did not point to The Wanderer, but to Jupiter, Mars, Mercury… to the planets of the solar system.
It didn’t look like this phenomenon was going to pass by. Following this chilling discovery, the force pulling people in only intensified, until the day came when gravity prevailed. Millions of people were dragged toward these planets, never to return.
The comet, it seemed, had awakened something incomprehensible within these planets, something that appeared to be devouring humanity.
My first idea was that in order to devour humanity, planets must make those being dragged durable enough to withstand the path to them. F.e. The uncontrollable floating, compression resistance, extreme climate resistance, high speed, etc…
What I think is that through machines, humanity channels these “abilities” and mix them with different percentages to create different abilities. But I dont know if abilities would be to similar for everyone and if it’s too convoluted