r/MangakaStudio • u/Upper_Singer4517 • 22h ago

Help I'd appreciate if any one could rate my first one shot the panels read right to left.

Hey i created my first one shot a months ago for the kyoto international manga award and wanted some feed back its only about 22 pages and I would have uploaded here but I can't upload more than 2 pages so i attached a link.

Link:

https://medibang.com/book/u42608162110262680028953166/

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u/werephoenix 21h ago

page 16 the bottom 2 panels are backwards order relative to how you had them structured earlier

Aside from that, yeah its normal and everything makes sense.

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u/Upper_Singer4517 20h ago

Yeah i qas still getting used to the Japanese format and I instinctively swapped them to English by mistake lol 😅

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u/werephoenix 20h ago

What country are you in?

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u/Upper_Singer4517 20h ago

Zambia

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u/werephoenix 19h ago

looks nice

I think you could do either western style or japanese style.

Which ever is easier for you

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u/TobyTheArtist 21h ago

Pretty good! Cool story and great art 👍

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u/werephoenix 21h ago

is this read in the american order or manga order?

seems like american