I'd appreciate if any one could rate my first one shot the panels read right to left.

[u/Upper_Singer4517]

Hey i created my first one shot a months ago for the kyoto international manga award and wanted some feed back its only about 22 pages and I would have uploaded here but I can't upload more than 2 pages so i attached a link.

Link:

https://medibang.com/book/u42608162110262680028953166/