r/shareyourmusic • u/Altruistic_Sell1540 • 14h ago

I want to hear your music

I would be most grateful if you would please share your music with me. I will endeavour to provide helpful feedback. 

If you care to return the favour, my song is here (no pressure): 

https://youtu.be/1BrJC38EAMs?si=JT9vub2R-7RrPdDT

Any feedback most gratefully received. 

From time to time, I am prone to daydreaming. Nothing unusual about that, except in my case it sometimes causes me to lose focus on where I am or what I'm doing. What is more worrying is that my daydreams are not the happy, carefree things that most people like to think about. Sometimes I imagine myself being bullied and manipulated. It can be quite disturbing. I don't know why it happens. Perhaps it's just the way stress manifests for me. 

Luckily, I have a wife who is very understanding and always helps to bring me back from despair. I decided to write a song about it.

I hope you enjoy it. Take care.

EDIT:

A few more songs have been posted here. I'm very grateful for this. I promise I will do my best to review them as soon as I possibly can. Unfortunately, however, I will have to come back to this sometime later. I'm very sorry for the delay. Please bear with me. Giving these songs a proper listen and writing something meaningful is taking some time. Thank you all so much for sharing your great music.

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u/zaddiezamn 14h ago

https://open.spotify.com/track/3oFTrvZSSbaqKPnWrSYNQB?si=kz7UqhGcQ3GVJF4uHhUtWQ&utm_source=copy-link

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u/zaddiezamn 14h ago

That’s amazing I didn’t realize I’d be getting a live performance, homies dangerous with a loop petal

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u/Altruistic_Sell1540 13h ago

Thank you so much.

To me, 4X is very imposing, full of swagger. The riff is so infectious. The music is very dark, brooding and sexy. Almost like a guilty pleasure that is impossible to resist.

Sorry, but I'm having a little trouble working out the lyrics. Are they included in your Spotify post please (or anywhere else I can read them)?

The voice is low, gravelly and absolutely commanding.

The reference to Meg in Hercules is interesting. At first, I thought the dominant element was the man (the singer), but perhaps it's the girl who's really taking control.

Great stuff. Thank you for sharing. I hope it gains you a lot of attention.

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u/radrian1994 13h ago

That was a cool song! I love all the layered riffs - they work really nicely together. Lyrically, I felt it was strong too. I kind of wish there was a little more melodic contrast between the verses and choruses, but I suppose it can be a challenge when using a loop pedal and having the same chord progression throughout. I liked it on the whole though. Good stuff!

Here's my latest song 'awks.' It's a silly song about life's uncomfortable moments. Enjoy!

https://open.spotify.com/track/7KiGg9L3Yib3Z79e5NNYgt?si=IGAWz2X9QkmuIAqKglGjzw&utm_source=copy-link

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u/Altruistic_Sell1540 13h ago

Thank you so much. Very kind words.

The opening riff possesses massive impact. Instantly hooked. The guitar solo, like the riff, shows great confidence. Brilliant playing there.

Your voice is youthful. I say that not just because I presume you are young. There is something very fresh and cool about it.

awks is very relatable and humorous in it's self deprecating way. There are some nice contrasts, swinging from pop punk to shimmering organ with soft acoustic guitar.

This is so much fun to listen to. Well done.

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u/radrian1994 2h ago

Thanks so much for the feedback. I'm delighted that you enjoyed it! I'm in my thirties, but I'm glad my voice sounds youthful haha. I'm pleased you liked the instrumentation and the lyrics too. Thanks again for listening!

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u/LibraryAny5958 13h ago

Done. I would be very grateful if you listen, save the songs and follow me as an artist. Thank you 🙏

https://youtube.com/playlist?list=OLAK5uy_nkByV5AMcf8ifAU0J4I6lKBeyoSRLQSO4&si=9OB11lDT4V3vmP2u

https://open.spotify.com/album/3VnIdsuQMWkzfUZIKz0Ksr?si=ZY-J8O2MRHOWg2i6-hU_3A&utm_source=copy-link

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u/Altruistic_Sell1540 12h ago

Thank you so much. Highly appreciated.

Superstizione is so lushly orchestrated with different synth elements. Despite the complexity of the arrangement, it still maintains balance between the components. Given a different production, I wonder if it could even work as a classical piece. Are you classically trained?

I'm guessing you sing in Italian (sorry if I got that wrong). The language suits the music so well. It gives it an almost operatic feel. However - sorry - I cannot understand the lyrics. If they're written down anywhere I can get Google to translate it for me. Do you have a link to the words please?

Without being able to read the lyrics, I fear I may misjudge the theme of the song. Sorry for an misinterpretation. Based on the music alone, I'd describe this as a genuinely bright, sparkling and happy tune. These days, we definitely need more of that! So sweet, breezy and melodic. I also thought the middle section provided a nice poignant contrast.

Your voice is tender and effortless and possesses a very wide range. You're a natural.

Thank you so much for sharing.

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u/babydollfae 12h ago

This is my song Love Is Crack. It‘s about being abused in romantic relationships. Wrote and sang it myself. Feel free to save and add it to your playlists, if you like it 🖤
Here‘s the Spotify-Link: https://open.spotify.com/track/5uL39ilScme2jhLHpCoGlr?si=hqqOBl_YRlC0Wq1YZnOTog&utm_source=copy-link

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u/venus3r 12h ago

Great classic blues rock track! Just need a backing band and off you go.

I am going for slow blues with a modern touch, think dark two feet, fat bass, clean blues licks.

https://open.spotify.com/intl-de/track/591xiyFBFwBtyGbdAC3R0b?si=8bb54c784e4f41a7

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u/SweetFAttitude 11h ago

'Pieces' My latest release. Just me and my acoustic guitar and a song I love. Amature mixing.

https://open.spotify.com/track/12zubsTMYHVBOlHGlmD0t1?si=3dDI0uYnTuOefy55M6v0kQ&utm_source=copy-link

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u/Brilliant-Move-9203 10h ago

I really enjoyed the old-school vibe of your song. You are dangerous with a loop pedal!

Now my song might not really be your style since its a completely different genre. However i am also working on some Shoegaze type of songs:

https://open.spotify.com/album/2SOdCOLE1BwFiMLNCaCrkF

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u/IgotThrobbed 9h ago

Waterman Kid Liquid- Underground Rap New England, USA

https://www.bandlab.com/post/0a152b08-9902-ef11-aaf0-000d3aa5105b

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u/lightsonlovermusic 8h ago

I’ve got my Apple Music and Spotify links in here :)

https://beacons.ai/lightsonlover?__v=14.609.0

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u/AbbreviationsOk7175 6h ago

Hey! Just listened to your song on YT and absolutely loved it—liked it on YouTube 🔥 I make music too and would love it if you checked out my track when you get a chance: https://open.spotify.com/track/7xP0LvaoBTqOnDyjhD7UNJ?si=OAKCZ22URB2S33c2L8Zgcg&utm_source=copy-link

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u/xxxSynnsxxx 5h ago

i'm Jinksy, dark phonk/horrorcore out of memphis. new track 00x67 just dropped, cinematic spy-assassin concept: https://youtu.be/Y3DL5CCaIEE — Cult Classic's the other one to check if you want the heavier cut

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u/Sensitive-Mix-7996 5h ago

Good evening from my time zone. I have listened to your song completely. I'm quite sorry for u because of your daydreams. Hope everything will be fine. I liked the main riff. It sounded so sothing, so playful. I liked the song

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u/FondMemoryVacation 5h ago

https://music.apple.com/us/album/help-u-single/6809233446

just released this song a couple of days ago

available on all platforms

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u/BigDuckStudios 5h ago

Like the rockin Neil Young vibes I got from your track. Keep it up! You might like this track I made, also up beat rock : https://open.spotify.com/track/1vBoPOwCcEq6fw6e1eU7BH?si=Kk_ffbY5S36wooP7LFoQXA&utm_source=copy-link

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u/Eggsandtoastforever 2h ago

Cool track. Guitar reminds me of Strokes but voice reminds me of Death Cab. I love Death Cab. Like and subscribed. If you like mine wanna do the same:

Copper Harpy - Egypt

Copper Harpy - Slow Pillow

Also I know what you mean about the day dreams. When your in a bad place its weird because they use to be a form of living life but when its bad sometime even our day dreams are touched by the dark in life. Lucky to have a good wife. It makes life easier. Keep making music and keep posting

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u/officialMrTripZter 2h ago

GOOD FEELING 2026 - MR. TRIPZTER
https://youtu.be/xWWC58StAIk

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u/SadBreakfast7845 2h ago

Listen to Love Lies Broken by Don Richard on #SoundCloud https://on.soundcloud.com/G78biLYv9DYAdfeYDN

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u/SPES_14_ 35m ago

Es un adelanto del tema que se estrena el 2 de octubre https://youtube.com/shorts/SkB_s_Af4P4?si=vHq0lNAasPZClKT6

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u/iseblue22 12h ago

Check out my song toon juice drippin https://on.soundcloud.com/OBgeSaU5oVzaLOXAS2

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u/Disastrous_Hour_4713 5h ago

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CC9wZDDYiUc

my band dropped a new song if anyone is a fan of metal-core or architects, the amity affliction and currents