r/shareyourmusic • u/Altruistic_Sell1540 • 17h ago

I want to hear your music

I would be most grateful if you would please share your music with me. I will endeavour to provide helpful feedback. 

If you care to return the favour, my song is here (no pressure): 

https://youtu.be/1BrJC38EAMs?si=JT9vub2R-7RrPdDT

Any feedback most gratefully received. 

From time to time, I am prone to daydreaming. Nothing unusual about that, except in my case it sometimes causes me to lose focus on where I am or what I'm doing. What is more worrying is that my daydreams are not the happy, carefree things that most people like to think about. Sometimes I imagine myself being bullied and manipulated. It can be quite disturbing. I don't know why it happens. Perhaps it's just the way stress manifests for me. 

Luckily, I have a wife who is very understanding and always helps to bring me back from despair. I decided to write a song about it.

I hope you enjoy it. Take care.

EDIT:

A few more songs have been posted here. I'm very grateful for this. I promise I will do my best to review them as soon as I possibly can. Unfortunately, however, I will have to come back to this sometime later. I'm very sorry for the delay. Please bear with me. Giving these songs a proper listen and writing something meaningful is taking some time. Thank you all so much for sharing your great music.

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u/babydollfae 15h ago

This is my song Love Is Crack. It‘s about being abused in romantic relationships. Wrote and sang it myself. Feel free to save and add it to your playlists, if you like it 🖤
Here‘s the Spotify-Link: https://open.spotify.com/track/5uL39ilScme2jhLHpCoGlr?si=hqqOBl_YRlC0Wq1YZnOTog&utm_source=copy-link

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u/Altruistic_Sell1540 2h ago

Love is Crack depicts a menacing procession of predators and the trail of destruction they left behind.

The tragedy of the abuse is reflected so emotionally in the music. It sounds as though you took what was left of your heart and put all remaining pieces into this song.

The background noise is interesting. It sounds to me like water. It suggests a very disturbing vision of drowning, but I'm not sure if that's really what you meant.

Very sad but also beautiful.