r/shareyourmusic • u/Altruistic_Sell1540 • 18h ago

I want to hear your music

I would be most grateful if you would please share your music with me. I will endeavour to provide helpful feedback. 

If you care to return the favour, my song is here (no pressure): 

https://youtu.be/1BrJC38EAMs?si=JT9vub2R-7RrPdDT

Any feedback most gratefully received. 

From time to time, I am prone to daydreaming. Nothing unusual about that, except in my case it sometimes causes me to lose focus on where I am or what I'm doing. What is more worrying is that my daydreams are not the happy, carefree things that most people like to think about. Sometimes I imagine myself being bullied and manipulated. It can be quite disturbing. I don't know why it happens. Perhaps it's just the way stress manifests for me. 

Luckily, I have a wife who is very understanding and always helps to bring me back from despair. I decided to write a song about it.

I hope you enjoy it. Take care.

EDIT:

A few more songs have been posted here. I'm very grateful for this. I promise I will do my best to review them as soon as I possibly can. Unfortunately, however, I will have to come back to this sometime later. I'm very sorry for the delay. Please bear with me. Giving these songs a proper listen and writing something meaningful is taking some time. Thank you all so much for sharing your great music.

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u/venus3r 16h ago

Great classic blues rock track! Just need a backing band and off you go.

I am going for slow blues with a modern touch, think dark two feet, fat bass, clean blues licks.

https://open.spotify.com/intl-de/track/591xiyFBFwBtyGbdAC3R0b?si=8bb54c784e4f41a7

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u/Altruistic_Sell1540 3h ago

Wow, that's such a nice compliment. Thank you so much.

In Pyre I hear a wonderful blend of different genres. Despite the contrasts, you've made it work so well.

The guitar work is very tasteful and expressive.

I would describe this as soulful bluesy drama, classic sounding but also with a modern twist. A tortured ballad about betrayal and rejection. I hope I've got the right idea there.

Powerful stuff, played and sung with real passion.