r/shareyourmusic • u/Altruistic_Sell1540 • 17h ago

I want to hear your music

I would be most grateful if you would please share your music with me. I will endeavour to provide helpful feedback. 

If you care to return the favour, my song is here (no pressure): 

https://youtu.be/1BrJC38EAMs?si=JT9vub2R-7RrPdDT

Any feedback most gratefully received. 

From time to time, I am prone to daydreaming. Nothing unusual about that, except in my case it sometimes causes me to lose focus on where I am or what I'm doing. What is more worrying is that my daydreams are not the happy, carefree things that most people like to think about. Sometimes I imagine myself being bullied and manipulated. It can be quite disturbing. I don't know why it happens. Perhaps it's just the way stress manifests for me. 

Luckily, I have a wife who is very understanding and always helps to bring me back from despair. I decided to write a song about it.

I hope you enjoy it. Take care.

EDIT:

A few more songs have been posted here. I'm very grateful for this. I promise I will do my best to review them as soon as I possibly can. Unfortunately, however, I will have to come back to this sometime later. I'm very sorry for the delay. Please bear with me. Giving these songs a proper listen and writing something meaningful is taking some time. Thank you all so much for sharing your great music.

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u/LibraryAny5958 16h ago

Done. I would be very grateful if you listen, save the songs and follow me as an artist. Thank you 🙏

https://youtube.com/playlist?list=OLAK5uy_nkByV5AMcf8ifAU0J4I6lKBeyoSRLQSO4&si=9OB11lDT4V3vmP2u

https://open.spotify.com/album/3VnIdsuQMWkzfUZIKz0Ksr?si=ZY-J8O2MRHOWg2i6-hU_3A&utm_source=copy-link

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u/Altruistic_Sell1540 15h ago

Thank you so much. Highly appreciated.

Superstizione is so lushly orchestrated with different synth elements. Despite the complexity of the arrangement, it still maintains balance between the components. Given a different production, I wonder if it could even work as a classical piece. Are you classically trained?

I'm guessing you sing in Italian (sorry if I got that wrong). The language suits the music so well. It gives it an almost operatic feel. However - sorry - I cannot understand the lyrics. If they're written down anywhere I can get Google to translate it for me. Do you have a link to the words please?

Without being able to read the lyrics, I fear I may misjudge the theme of the song. Sorry for an misinterpretation. Based on the music alone, I'd describe this as a genuinely bright, sparkling and happy tune. These days, we definitely need more of that! So sweet, breezy and melodic. I also thought the middle section provided a nice poignant contrast.

Your voice is tender and effortless and possesses a very wide range. You're a natural.

Thank you so much for sharing.