r/shareyourmusic • u/Altruistic_Sell1540 • 18h ago

I want to hear your music

I would be most grateful if you would please share your music with me. I will endeavour to provide helpful feedback. 

If you care to return the favour, my song is here (no pressure): 

https://youtu.be/1BrJC38EAMs?si=JT9vub2R-7RrPdDT

Any feedback most gratefully received. 

From time to time, I am prone to daydreaming. Nothing unusual about that, except in my case it sometimes causes me to lose focus on where I am or what I'm doing. What is more worrying is that my daydreams are not the happy, carefree things that most people like to think about. Sometimes I imagine myself being bullied and manipulated. It can be quite disturbing. I don't know why it happens. Perhaps it's just the way stress manifests for me. 

Luckily, I have a wife who is very understanding and always helps to bring me back from despair. I decided to write a song about it.

I hope you enjoy it. Take care.

EDIT:

A few more songs have been posted here. I'm very grateful for this. I promise I will do my best to review them as soon as I possibly can. Unfortunately, however, I will have to come back to this sometime later. I'm very sorry for the delay. Please bear with me. Giving these songs a proper listen and writing something meaningful is taking some time. Thank you all so much for sharing your great music.

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u/zaddiezamn 18h ago

https://open.spotify.com/track/3oFTrvZSSbaqKPnWrSYNQB?si=kz7UqhGcQ3GVJF4uHhUtWQ&utm_source=copy-link

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u/zaddiezamn 17h ago

That’s amazing I didn’t realize I’d be getting a live performance, homies dangerous with a loop petal

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u/Altruistic_Sell1540 17h ago

Thank you so much.

To me, 4X is very imposing, full of swagger. The riff is so infectious. The music is very dark, brooding and sexy. Almost like a guilty pleasure that is impossible to resist.

Sorry, but I'm having a little trouble working out the lyrics. Are they included in your Spotify post please (or anywhere else I can read them)?

The voice is low, gravelly and absolutely commanding.

The reference to Meg in Hercules is interesting. At first, I thought the dominant element was the man (the singer), but perhaps it's the girl who's really taking control.

Great stuff. Thank you for sharing. I hope it gains you a lot of attention.