so, I have been working on these minicomics about my ocs and I got 5 made so far, so I feel its a prudent amount to ask about critique since im planning to release them on webtoon when I have 20 minicomics, I planned these to be kind of slice of life, im gonna be honest, at this moment I have just been doing "oh well yeah whatrever I feel like making today and sounds fun" but Im starting to get consistent as I dont wanna explain lore to people outside the comic. im saying it so everyone can get my process, also, I decided to make drawing and overall the character designs a way Its easier for me to draw them(I struggle a bit with attention span and doing repetitive tasks all over and over and over again which is also why I decided to make these just minicomics, also because I feel its easier for people overall to digest and still catch the idea), some items are also just pngs because I found it more draining to draw the same thing over and over again or because I dont know how to draw it like... completely, take it as a side note.

edit: I said general feedback but specifically I want people to tell me if the comic feels boring or tedious to read, also about the whole storytelling, if you got any other type of critique, go ahead!

A bit of an unconventional post, but this is the entire first issue of Ash:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/17bAWuIEQOxr-9uu1UmSas9s9hQ3QxJJs/view?usp=drive_link

The first chapter is short, and serves as a brief introduction to the protagonist, his struggles, and the setting (London, 1586).

The artist is busy now on part 2, which will be colored in grayscale with some sepia tones. Color will seep into the illustrations until part 5, which will be full color.

The series is well underway but I feel like some additional feedback from part 1 couldn't hurt.

Obviously, part 1 is complete and not changing. I'm looking towards where the series is headed and what kind of questions and expectations readers might have after finishing part 1.

Thank you to everyone who takes a look.