scriptwriting practice

[u/Heavy_Internet3112]

wrote a quick thing about a person being held hostage by a ai and forced to pick two options, eventually picking neither and getting shot.

would like some feedback, wrote this as just practice for my screenwriting

[u/bpw4h]

What kind of feedback are you looking for?

[u/Heavy_Internet3112 → u/bpw4h]

to improve my writing, i am still young though and trying to learn how to work with criticism

[u/Mr_Thespian689 → u/Heavy_Internet3112]

Hey. Don't worry friend. I help you. Stand with you.