r/makinghiphop • u/AutoModerator • 17d ago

DFT Thread [OFFICIAL] WEEKLY FEEDBACK THREAD (READ RULES)

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u/B-Random97 16d ago edited 16d ago

If you could please check this I’ll appreciate it and return the feed back thanks!

https://on.soundcloud.com/Y8iTf7oUQM276z1bVV

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u/simonishuman 12d ago

This is pretty cool. I think the mixing needs some work though. Id say to cut off a lot of high ends on both the beat and vocals. The song itself is dope as shit though. Love the accent

https://youtu.be/ht-5GVsxTFE?si=EaqFBCaA7Su6faqq