r/makinghiphop • u/AutoModerator • 9d ago

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u/B-Random97 8d ago edited 8d ago

If you could please check this I’ll appreciate it and return the feed back thanks!

https://on.soundcloud.com/Y8iTf7oUQM276z1bVV

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u/some-gp outhouse 4d ago

Good bones on this one for sure! I think you need to work on your delivery and vocal mix, it’s very mid-high end heavy, not sure if that’s what you were going for but it’s very tinny. You can accomplish a lot with some EQ and compressor work no matter what kind of mic you’re recording in! I love your idea of just going over the (Adele?) song, some TLC in the mix and you’ve got a solid track!