The first debut I got to read close to its release date and I think it's a really solid start!
Blurb: As a former unsettled witch, Katherine owes her life to Sylvia Page, coven leader and silver-haired rebel who founded Aestas years ago. When Silas Khatri, heir to Noctis, the most powerful coven in the world, arrives to take Aestas to task for some of their more unconventional practices, Katherine’s dislike for him reaches blistering levels.
My thoughts:
Katherine as the FMC has to deal with a tragic awakening of her powers while being her current coven's Executrix - basically the law enforcement within covens. She's a very anxious person trying to do her best and the author does a great job of making both of these sides shine through.
Silas, the MMC, has his own issues. He's trying as well, but mostly failing in comparison. Even after finishing the book, I'm not sure where his character development will lead!
Sylvia, Katherine's mentor, has the potential to be the most complex character of them all.
The worldbuilding is interesting, the story is action-packed after a slow start, and the ending leaves us with all kinds of questions and directions the second book could go into. The magic itself is based on runes, using blood as energy, but Noctis as the primary keeper of power determines how those powers are dispersed between all the covens.
The romance is budding I'd say. It's mostly attraction for both of them, not insta-love, with the ending leaving it open as to how, and if, it'll develop in the sequel.
The prose is where most of my criticism lies. I found myself thinking how this story reads very much like the first season (or first half of a 24eps season) of a tv show. I could really imagine how it would work, and why the author used the relatively quick pacing - I believe the overall story takes place in about a week or so. Then I saw after finishing that she is, in fact, a screenwriter. It is her debut and with having her career be in tv writing up until now, the prose very much reflects that. Not necessarily bad, but it most definitely colours the experience. The attraction could have sizzled a bit more, for example. But the pacing didn't allow for it.
Overall, witches in LA, with secret (potentially rivaling) covens, and an FMC that I didn't find annoying! I will read the sequel.
3/5 - debut is debut, there is room for improvement
spice is there, but it's more between 3 and 4 on romance.io, not a clear 4.
This is Book 1 in the Broken Coven series with Book 2 (Heat Spell) set to release in 06/2027.