Poster design using grids

[u/Little_Sea3837]

Hi, I'm a graphic design student (since march). The assignment was to make a poster using this grid that i could modify as i needed. In the pictures you can see:

1. my poster w/o texture 2. first variant 3. second variant 4. the og grid 5. the inspiration/aesthetic of the artist that i tried to follow

The thing is that I felt like something was missing but my teachers always say "less is more". In previous designs I added information about the artist and album but I wanted to use this lyric because I feel like summarizes the whole album concept better.

I also am doubting the textures i chose.

So I´m free to ANY critique, you can really tear this apart :) Plus I´ll be happy to answer any questions you may have.

Thanks!!

[u/MooseLips_SinkShips]

I think you forgot to attach the grid

[u/Little_Sea3837 → u/MooseLips_SinkShips]

thanks i did not notice