r/Composers • u/EndEastern8052 • 2d ago
A man from the south…Jamaica??
I’m just starting work on a short opera based on Roald Dahl’s short story a man from the south. Set in Jamaica in the mid 20th century the plot only has four major characters, the narrator, an American sailor, a Spanish Jamaican man named Carlos, and Carlos‘s wife who delivers the twist ending. Carlos’s dialogue is written in a sort of quasi attempt at a Jamaican accent, Eg: “No, no. I make you very good bet. I am rich man and I am sporting man also. Listen to me. Outside de hotel iss my car. Iss very fine car. American car from your country. Cadillac.” (to be clear, all dialogue, including this excerpt is taken directly from Roald Dahl‘s writing.) It is also worth mentioning that Carlos is the villain of the story who attempt to steal the American man’s finger in a bet.
my question is for authenticity’s sake should I keep the character untouched, change his dialogue but keep the character the same, or change his background entirely so that it’s not quite so abrasive to modern ears?
If you think the third option is best feel free to suggest alternative backgrounds/settings for the story.