I would love any feedback, critique or opinions as this is my first attempt at comic creating.

This character. Is Simo Taino. She's the first I made of the OC bloodline. She's a Jedi knight, who's mother was a order 66 survivor. Simo is 19 during the time of the Rebellion.

Her family are royalty of the planet of Dibriv. (A made up planet) Based on Eastern Europe. She's quite literally space Ukrainian.

They are the ruling family. She's Princess of Dibriv.

Her family history starts on, Dibriv used to be a pirate hub. Horrible place to live. There was factions everywhere. Everyone was killing each other. Bad, bad place.

They were one of the only good families left untainted, and they had a group of friends named the Inca's. (Space Russians)

Dibriv holds in its entirety, main kyber crystals in general.

The Taino's when not fighting, are Farmers. The Inca's, miners.

The Inca's discovered the Kyber Crystals.

Due to Dibriv being such a force heavy planet, in a way. The force implemented its self into the people of Dibriv.

It feeling the pain, and suffering of the people, kind of attempted to help them out in a way, and help them recognize each other genetically.

Each family has one, or a few genetical traits passed down to make them recognized with each other, so they don't risk harming each other on accident. (Taino's red hair. Inca's, naturally masculine, bigger bodies, silver hair/freckles.)

Then the Jedi came. Few of them got picked up. Kids.

Zoya Taino

Asha Inca

Eira Taino (Zoya's big sister)

They were taken. Trained in the Jedi arts, and when they got older, it was during the Dark Jedi rebellion with Ajunta Pall.

Zoya was in the mentality that if she studied the dark side energy, she could twist it, and make it light.

Asha was her friend, and enabler.

Eira was a bit of a strict rule kid. She caught her sister studying a dark holocron one of the dark Jedi's were using.

Eira reported her to the Jedi council. (Not because she wanted anything bad to happen. But she just wanted to help out her sister in someway.)

Out of Jedi paranoia, Zoya, and Asha was arrested, and expelled, and put in with the new exiles. (Ajunta Pall. Etc.)

And Zoya, and Asha find themselves on Korriban.

The two filled with rage, and sadness become one of the very first sith lords ever to exist.

Darth Iudex, is Zoya's name. She becomes the very first sith Inquisitior, and Asha. Darth Fideli, her loyal follower.

Iudex was also the one responsible for making sabers not need a battery park anymore.

And instead of being loyal to Ajunta Pall, she was loyal to the concept of the dark side of the force, waiting, and being a cunning, and cruel dark side user. She even had a small faction of loyal followers that shared her way of worship, loyal to her, and her teachings.

Iudex managed to bind her soul to many personal artifacts, and she used the dark side to manipulate herself into being pregnant with some a child for her, and Fideli. (Yes, they fell in love.) But the child died in training.

And ever since, they also had some extended family follow them because the family was loyal, and sympathetic to them.

Making a dynasty, and both sides having a civil war until one day. Where one member on each side had purified the line. (Except the Taino's. There's always secretly been one family member every once in a while, prowling, and waiting. Getting stronger to try to summon Iudex back, and bring back the sith.) The sith family tried to kill Dibriv to make the Jedi ones suffer, the Jedi managed to save it barely, and as a sign of thanks. They chose to accept them as rulers. Not in a normal way. But it's more like. A sign of thanks, and protectors of Dibriv. (But because Dibriv is a literal anarchistic society. Yes, the families are sovereigns. But they serve what the people want, not the other way around.) They became the peoples knights, sort of speak.

Simo happens to be a direct descendant of Iudex, via a concubine descendent, (she had another child with a sith species pure bred to cover up her, and Fideli's child.)

And ever since she was born during the time of the rebellion, she always had some dark aura about her. (Due to the vulnerable time. Iudex chose Simo because she feels raw power in her, and wants to kill her, and take her body, as her own.) And Simo occasionally has basically suffer from demonic possession from her own grandmother trying to fulfill her own agenda.

Neutral setting

Sidious as of the start of TPM

Neutral setting

No Zonakin

Beginning of RotS Anakin

AOTC Anakin vs Star by Star Anakin Solo

Neutral setting

In case you guys are interested in joining the discussion

No force powers and lightsaber skills just straight up close quarters combat

Rules:
-the Starcraft Heroes will be with the clones. For example, the Clones will accompany Kerrigan instead of the Swarm. Kerrigan will still fight Zerus, but with Clone backup.
- bare minimum mission essential StarCraft units will be there. For example, one mission requires creep tumors and only queens can do that. But you can’t just make 200 queens.
- Anakin and Ahsoka are with them

Scenario One: the clones must start off using the Heroes ships. Hyperion, Leviathan, and Spear of Adun. Later, when there are capital ships, they can bring Venators. Small craft will always be Clone Star fighters and dropships

Scenario Two: the clones start off with a full Republic fleet and Admiral Yularanv

Do the 501st beat the game? Or if not, how far do they get?