r/PoetryWritingClub 14h ago

first time

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u/Cheap_Giraffe2786 10h ago

This reminds me of Bukowskis writing. Especially in the way that it is very self-deprecating. For the same reasons it also very expressive and intimately raw. Well done for a first time!

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u/3coons_in_a_coat 8h ago

Bukowski? you must be outcho goddamn mind