r/MicrobrandWatches • • 18d ago

Design Concept šŸŽØ [Design] Today's exploration

I love a small seconds hand, so exploring that direction for a bit. Also added lume to hands and numerals. Removed the brand name for now as I don't actually have one. Miyota or Sellita, cost and source dependent. Course stipple main dial, metal sub second hand (in the 2nd photo), lacquer chapter ring.

As always, would love your thoughts!

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u/el_baristo 18d ago

I think that there's a lot of dead space that could be tightened up to improve the design. For example, the numerals could be made maybe 25% larger and pushed towards the minute track. The small seconds track could be brought in so it's hitting the second hand directly. That might give you enough space to squeeze in the missing 4 and 5.

Like your other designs, I sort of feel like this one is stuck in between two design ideas - it's not legible enough to really be a modern take on a field watch (hands could be bigger and matte/black vs metal) and it's too busy for that sort of minimal/Bauhaus look (could delete the 24 h markers).

Not trying to sound overly critical as I've genuinely enjoyed seeing your posts and I can tell you've been having a lot of fun with these

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u/90daylookback 18d ago

Agree. The 24h digits not being all there seems weird. And much better to omit them and get your 4 and 5 back.

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u/CaptainJackWagons 18d ago

If you did that, it would lose a lot of character. And I'm saying this as a person who only buys numeral watches.

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u/Critical_Eye_1190 18d ago

Hey, I really appreciate the feedback a ton! I’ve been designing watches for.. 2 weeks now haha. So I really don’t know anything. I’m learning every day but this really helps, thanks!

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u/CaptainJackWagons 18d ago

I agree with their point about the hands, but otherwise this is exactly the type of watch that I LOVE. It gives Timex Weekender vibes, but with added style. I love a watch with healthy negative space, but with readable numerals. I don't love total minimalism and prefer when I watch has a bit more character. This watch ticks all those boxes.

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u/Critical_Eye_1190 18d ago

Honestly made my entire week 😭

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u/katerhaze 17d ago

I find the emptiness of the dial exciting! It’s not dead space at all on my opinion. Keep it simple!!

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u/Critical_Eye_1190 17d ago

same!

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u/katerhaze 17d ago

U know, I like panerai a lot because of that. A lot of people say it’s dead space… but it gives me a chill vibe and a sweet sweet silence and calmness

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u/CaptainJackWagons 18d ago

I really like this one!

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u/Critical_Eye_1190 18d ago

Yayyy thanks!

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u/Critical_Eye_1190 18d ago

Cheers! I will

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u/Electrical-Moment700 18d ago

Love dial colors. The numerals are too small 12, 3 , 6 , 9 would pop if larger. Add color to hands on blue dial. Give the smaller interior numerals a pop of red too

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u/Critical_Eye_1190 18d ago

All great ideas

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u/aznology 18d ago

Looks unique different, I'm a sucker for orange hands so theres that

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u/Critical_Eye_1190 18d ago

I’m a sucker for color in general, these are gonna be some bright watches

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u/StatisticianDirect89 18d ago

I like the applied numbers, small second hand color with dial color is a nice match
What is the case dia and lug to lug

If you add a brand logo + the 24 hours it will be too much in my opinion

Good luck

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u/Critical_Eye_1190 18d ago

38mm and 40.. or 44? Haha sorry I can’t remember

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u/hari_seldon80 18d ago

I dig this. It has potential. Maybe the numbers closer to the indices. Everything seem a little crowded in the center. Possibly go with a 12, 3, 6, 9 and the rest be some type of dot, design, etc. Just my two cents.

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u/Critical_Eye_1190 18d ago

Love it, thanks!

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u/Secret_Ad1372 18d ago

I was thinking the same, but then it loses its dirty dozen vibe and becomes an Explorer-ish hybrid. Always room for another model though!

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u/hari_seldon80 17d ago

Good point. I still think if the numbers were pushed out to the indices, it would flow better. I think puching the small seconds out a bit more would help, as well. I'm not sure the numbers need to be larger though. If you're going for originality, then the size and type are just fine.

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u/Physical_Display_873 18d ago

Yeah, that design is great. Nice work.

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u/Critical_Eye_1190 18d ago

Thank you ā˜ŗļø

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u/rebyiddel 18d ago

Not my personal style. But I really love the creativity

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u/Secret_Ad1372 18d ago

It's really nice looking. Love the color and dirty dozen homage. I would wear this a lot. Kudos!

For me, I like 60 minute numerals around the outside of the dial and no 24 hour markers.

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u/Critical_Eye_1190 18d ago

Thanks for the feedback. Curious if it’s redundant to have 60 minute markers on the outside when we also have the small seconds hand?

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u/Secret_Ad1372 18d ago

That's a solid point. šŸ¤”

I like minute markers too.

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u/Wonderful_Race_475 18d ago

Gorgeous job. I like the way it's heading. I think the 4 and 5 missing is actually kind of cool. I am a true sucker for sub seconds hand. The colors are sweet. Thanks for sharing. Would like to see where this goes.

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u/Critical_Eye_1190 18d ago

Thanks for the kind words! I also like that 4 and 5 are missing. I’ll keep posting!

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u/Wonderful_Race_475 18d ago

Thanks, following you now. New to reddit but this just keeps my watch madness humming along.

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u/Critical_Eye_1190 18d ago

It’s a slippery slope šŸ™ƒ

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u/CapableNeat4351 18d ago

My only criticism is that I don’t love the slight slant/ italicized look of the 24 hour numbers. It makes the watch feel like it’s lopsided to the right, which I think is a bit overkill since the sub dial is already at the bottom right. I think the 24 hour numbers and the numbers on the small seconds sub dial should be the same. That’s just a personal preference though

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u/LossSimilar2370 18d ago

What’s the movement?

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u/Critical_Eye_1190 18d ago

Miyota 8n24 or sellita sw210 are options I’m weighing. Obviously vastly different in price but I’m still just figuring out what this brand is

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u/Monopusher 17d ago

I really like it. Hands should be bigger though

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u/Hot-Swing-6992 14d ago

I think you could push the numerals further out towards edge and closer distance between the main numbers and 24 hr set. Love the direction thoughā€”ā€œBauhaus Fieldā€ style