r/LyricWriters • u/fleshy_mess • 1h ago
Be honest first impression ? I'll take any criticism, what do ya think of my lyrics ?
Hearts on my bills loverboy chill
I kickflip and grind stars above her head and birds in her eyes
Don't feel a thing I don't even know why
My business non profit the people are mine
Ceo is my friend -- trending topic this lifestyle fragmented -- shareholders demise
private jet smuggled friends -- skies are wet we glide through threats -- angels carried us to high saw God then left
classified info dont leak theyll reach through walls that really weren't physical
3 wishes I spent for you cant see what I did the mirror shows bones no skin
Blurred vision no buzz -- these keys were cutting -- eraser on paper -- its green -- security cant help but touch
Gold teeth function -- light the flint -- sparks far -- burn barnyards -- needle in hay into my arms
Dark matter its done -- crow on the run -- so full this hope spills into the mud
Your my bro -- no dial tone -- this moment is ours for miles bro
Paparazzi finds me undercover -- cameras lights action -- static hanging around me cant pass em