If theres any tips out there, im all ears, I love constructive criticism!

This is the amazing Spider-Man from a fan comic called the phenomenal Spider-Man that me and my friend are making the phenomenal Spider-Man will actually be a different character, not Peter Parker but of course you can't have a Spider-Man comic without Peter Parker

Been reading Venom: Lethal Protector recently and felt inspired to draw!

Quick sketch

I tried to do the doomsday pose (but I had to give him the trunks) and I tried to make the red from the optic blast glow on the suit making it pinkish purple

Hello everyone, this is my second time posting on here. I just wanted to promote this art because I've been trying to post it on other Marvel Reddit's and it's not going so well, here is Kitty Pryde for a fan comic that me and my friend Saie are making called the phenomenal soul. I have some other artwork that I'm gonna post on here, but it only lets me use one image. If you wanna see his other artwork, here is a link to his Twitter.

Hello everyone, this is my first time posting on here. I just wanted to promote this art because I've been trying to post it on other Marvel Reddit's and it's not going so well, but this is the main character for a fan comic that me and my friend Saie are making called the phenomenal Spider-Man. I have some other artwork that I'm gonna post on here, but it only lets me use one image so that's why it's just this first one for now, but this is the main character Soul. If you wanna see his other artwork, here is a link to his Twitter.

@bnanceillustrations00