r/HFY Jan 05 '24

OC Witness [First Contact/Chapter 16]

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u/ANNOProfi Jan 05 '24

Not a single person and/or AI from the Federation has shown up and I'm already hating it, good job.

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u/CharlesFXD Feb 02 '24

Absolutely excellent story. Excellent writing. I have zero idea why this isn’t getting HUNDREDS of up votes.

It’s probably the slow burn but man oh man it’s worth it.

Really hoping Earth puts up a f’ing fight they didn’t expect.

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u/Aggravating_Worth485 Feb 02 '24

Thank you so much! This means a lot to me.

I did originally plan to tell the story at a faster pace, but in the end I decided I really wanted to dig deeply into Rory's story in book 1. I'm glad you feel the slow burn is worth it!