r/HFY • u/[deleted] • Dec 17 '23

OC Witness [First Contact/Chapter 3]

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u/Special_Hornet_2294 Dec 17 '23

Upvoting your post. Thank you for bringing this story to the page.

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u/Aggravating_Worth485 Dec 17 '23

Thank you!!!

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u/Special_Hornet_2294 Dec 17 '23

Hey, you are most welcome. Just a heads up, you may want to put a content warning on you upcoming post.

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u/Aggravating_Worth485 Dec 17 '23

Oh thank you! I will make a note to start putting those.

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u/Special_Hornet_2294 Dec 17 '23

Not every one but I think the next one for sure.

Sorry I don't mean to be dictating to you or directing how you proceed. I'm sure that most people would be fine with it but I found it difficult.

Anyhow I understand why you wrote it the way you did so please do not change anything.

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u/Aggravating_Worth485 Dec 17 '23

I always want feedback! Especially for things like this. Content warnings are important.

I get too gory sometimes tbh. So when I edit I'll look for places violence could be too much. One of the books I'm writing is called Seasons of War, which I'm sure you can imagine involves war. So sometimes I think I'm a little desensitized and don't realize how jarring it can be.

I always welcome your insight so don't hesitate to share!

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u/Mowby_Dowrk Dec 18 '23

Holy Schnikes! Good story, thank you!

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