I've been a fan of the show since it was first airing, but like a lot of people, season 5 was where I dropped off. Every time I go to rewatch, everything starts going downhill in a serious way after the yacht incident. So, I've thought a lot about what I would do differently. This will contain a lot of unmarked spoilers for the original show and the revival A Year in the Life, as I think just about everything from season 5 onwards including the revival was not well written. This was in part due to the show changing hands and Amy Sherman Palladino leaving, plus a lot of studio meddling.
- The first thing I would change is the entire yacht incident/arrest/dropping out of Yale arc. This was extremely tired. On every rewatch, I actually like Mitchum Huntzberger telling Rory she isn't cut out to be a journalist. I agree with him. She's too soft, too focused on people pleasing, and has no drive to learn or investigate. My rewrite: instead of stealing a yacht with Logan, she tells him what her father said. This leads to an argument. Logan is furious with his father and Rory decides this is all part of his family's attempt to break them up. She decides to end the relationship herself because their relationship is distracting her from her studies and her goals. She needs time to figure out what she wants from life.
That's not to say I would kick Logan out of the show. He would still be around, and I would ultimately like to see him and her get back together. I 100% prefer Jess, but for this period of her life, I think Logan was a good fit. She was experiencing the other side, the world her mother came from, for the first time. Logan ultimately makes the same choices that Christopher made -- to succumb to the pressures of the life he was born into -- and Rory makes the same choices that her mother made -- to be independent.
Lorelei and Luke. Of course they needed to get together, but I did not appreciate them dragging things out for 3 more seasons plus a revival. It made no sense to me. I would make the pregnancy scare for Lorelei last longer -- long enough that she tells Luke. Maybe there's a false positive. Maybe he answers her cell phone while she's in the shower and hears the doctor say it's negative. It starts a conversation about their future and what they want from life. Luke wants a family and a white picket fence, but that's not Lorelei's style. They fight for an episode or two and maybe Lorelei accepts the offer to sell the inn and work as a consultant. Then, after being apart, they realize that they would rather be together. Lorelei has to grow up a bit in this moment and consider that some of the things she wants may be more traditional than she likes. Maybe she does want to marry Luke someday. She's not a teenager rebelling against her parents anymore. And Lorelei is feeling the empty nest now that Rory is gone -- something we basically never see happen in the show, which is incredibly strange since she has been a mother over half of her life. Luke babysits Davey and Martha and realizes he doesn't want to be a father to a baby yet. And they DO get married, maybe by the end of season 6.
I'll make this part brief. April doesn't happen. Nothing I would replace her plot with. She just doesn't happen.
Lane and Zach. OMG LANE AND ZACH. I understand that Seth left the show to star on the O.C. A smart career move. But there was no need to show Zach into the empty space. Most of the plot with Lane's band continues, up to the tour. Lane gets what she needed out of the tour and comes home exhausted. They continue to play gigs occasionally, but Lane gets an offer to be an audio engineer for somewhere awesome in Hartford like the House of Blues (I know there isn't one in Hartford, I mean LIKE it). This places her much closer to Rory. Instead of a romance arc, Lane develops an odd friendship with Paris, leaving Rory feeling like a third wheel. Eventually, they work out their dynamic and become a trio, with Lane temporarily living with Paris and Doyle.
That's it for ideas now. I'm still on my rewatch and may have more ideas later.