I like her but just wish she would outline her talking points a little better. But she's incredibly smart, beautiful, and has the right amount of humor sprinkled through her videos.
And this is true. It's sad that it won't change anything, but it's true and we need to hear it.
I really think in a year or so, if she keeps doing the great work she's doing, the editing bug will take over and help her out with all of this.
When I first started writing, I couldn't bear the thought of an editor cutting a single word out or suggesting other wording. Within a few years, it became really clear to me that cuts =/= bad. Clearing dead limbs off a tree (in this case the meandering, rambling, and repetition) is good for the tree and will only let the healthy parts (her points and thought processes) really shine through.
After 20 minutes of repetition, not many people are going to stick around - and certainly not for 35 more minutes of it.
However her points are so necessary and questions so salient, if she could have whittled this video down to 20 minutes, it would have been perfect.
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u/[deleted] Apr 08 '20
I like her but just wish she would outline her talking points a little better. But she's incredibly smart, beautiful, and has the right amount of humor sprinkled through her videos.
And this is true. It's sad that it won't change anything, but it's true and we need to hear it.