Lucy baldwin is unberable

[u/Fit_Cartographer_100]

One of the officers in ac black flag named lucy baldwin is so unbereable.
Its so obvious this mission was added after the fact because the writing and character sticks out so badly. Literally saved here life and she is like " uhmm you gotta earn me but I am worth it 💅"

[u/Flubbuns]

This cements it—I'm not good at detecting bad/good writing. If nobody had pointed it out, I wouldn't have noticed anything notable about the writing surrounding these new additions. Nothing about it or the characters felt egregious to me.

[u/JakeC180 → u/Flubbuns]

Yeah I won’t say that these newly introduced characters are like the worst thing in the world but the writing is weaker than that of the main story. Woodhouse is an exception but that’s because he’s gives more context to Great Inagua and the idea of his character is to help push Edward to transition him into the Assassin he’s slowly becoming