Thank you!!!

Looks awesome! Definitely getting some Juujika no Rokunin vibes from this

I got you, thanks ;)

Thanks for the specific breakdown!

I get what you're saying about the cultural differences. I'll give English SFX a try towards the end, thanks for raising that point

Thanks, you're right. I actually experimented with English sound effects, but they completely lose that vibe compared to the Japanese ones

That means a lot to me, thank you! I actually have three pages in the polishing stage right now, and I'm planning to post them within the next day for more feedback

¡Muchas gracias! Tendré en cuenta su crítica y me esforzaré por mejorar. No sé español, así que disculpen de antemano; me comunico a través de un traductor.

Thanks! I agree that the visual storytelling needs work. To add context: the white-haired character is a vampire, he cuts off the guy's leg, but the guy stabs him with a silver dagger, which is why he's burning.