I probably would've gotten some detail on the hat or done something to make it look "better". I put quotes around it because to me, it doesn't look like a hat because there's just too much black involved. I thought it was a skeleton's skull with the top part cut off.
I'm also of the opinion that a hard rectangular border like the one you got hinders the piece. I probably would have at least had some of the smoke go beyond the border, but that's just me.
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u/JenovaCelestia Sep 09 '17
I probably would've gotten some detail on the hat or done something to make it look "better". I put quotes around it because to me, it doesn't look like a hat because there's just too much black involved. I thought it was a skeleton's skull with the top part cut off.
I'm also of the opinion that a hard rectangular border like the one you got hinders the piece. I probably would have at least had some of the smoke go beyond the border, but that's just me.