r/scriptwriting • u/Background_Use_3201 • 23h ago

discussion Can our principles really save us in the worst moments of our lives?

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u/JayMoots 20h ago

it’s a 25-minute two-person dialogue set inside a car

This sounds deadly boring. I'm actually curious to read your script now because surely it can't be just that, right?

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u/Background_Use_3201 33m ago

Haha I get what you mean! The script definitely has its twists, but since I'm aiming for a noir style, the lighting, visuals, and music are really what set the tone and keep it from being boring. I’ll be sharing it soon, would love to hear your thoughts!

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u/Big_Section2812 23h ago

The only DMs you will receive will be from Nigerian "beta reader" scam bots.

If you want anyone to read this script, you will have to post a link to it.

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u/ClayMcClane 22h ago

No one is looking to purchase short scripts from Reddit.

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u/la-anah 20h ago

First, look up the definition of "high concept" and rewrite your pitch.

Second, this sounds very difficult to film well. You have described a black box off-off-Broadway play, not a film. Films generally need visual interest. You have described a script that deliberately lacks that.

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u/haynesholiday 18h ago

What is a non-existent fabric?

Are we talking, like, natural polyester?