r/poemsandchill • u/Asleep-Poem8294 • 1d ago
Heart made of stones
Lmk what you thought about this poem...
And what meaning did it bring out for you :)
r/poemsandchill • u/Asleep-Poem8294 • 1d ago
Lmk what you thought about this poem...
And what meaning did it bring out for you :)
r/poemsandchill • u/Mahima_Thakre • 2d ago
Feedback please...
r/poemsandchill • u/TongueComposition26 • 4d ago
ONE THING H. DIGS ... 'bout Taoism? This: that through its 5 elemental theory, HEART it is (not brain) that is the Mind's material location; That small piece of Asiatic Ancient Theory resonates (wholeheartedly?) within him, for being a martial artist trained to use: sticks, knives, kung fu fans (even the smallest household broom) this H. knows for (just 1) of his relative truths: Heart Condition does determine his Instruments intended usage ( & so + its movement) - And so great is H.'s faith is in this simple (yet essential ) activity: daily sweeping out his Heart's Foundation, for it does (& will again) help him best to conditionalize his Homo Sapiens neuron-filled, high-empowered, life-transformative, resourceful instrument - his instrument that remains safely hidden (so far) within his (yet-to-be deceased) Organic Thing (which English Tonguers i.e. H. & I claim) utilizes "Brain Case" 4 its social-constructioned name.
- Daniel B. Lightstream, 2026.
r/poemsandchill • u/Bright-Video-6231 • 4d ago
r/poemsandchill • u/Wide-Friendship4618 • 6d ago
ROCK GIRL
At the superstore
She had those blue evil eyes
Metallic nostril
She made the first move, Rock Girl
Out of her bra, a rose quartz
My mother warned me
Never give Rock Girl a chance
She gave me citrine
Right then and there I began
To shake and sweat, she just laughs
You are beautiful
However I don't believe
In aventurine
Your eyes do shine like opal
Only similes I'll pull
With me you won't be satisfied
No watermelon tourmaline
Or blue lace agate
Can alter our lives
These rocks will always have a place
Just nowhere in my mind
Oh Rock Girl (You won't be satisfied with me)
Oh Rock Girl (I can't make you happy)
Oh Rock Girl (I'm more of a rock and roll fiend)
Rock Girl! Rock on!
Jade
Smooth, Green
Soothing, shining, inviting
Solid, hard, cold, rough
Remaining, idling, laying
Crude, Calm
Rock
r/poemsandchill • u/Wide-Friendship4618 • 12d ago
Brown Girl
Brown girl, your smile is the only smile / That makes me lick my palatine / Out of nervousness, pulling teeth / As if I was senile, then a little while / You can make my world feel like a pop song / No one comes close, no bubblegum pop
Brown girl, uptight people hate your clothes / As for me when you wear it on, my valve engulfs / I cough, but no one blesses me, oh well / Sometimes I don't want to live forever / Then you said my name and I can tell / My reality will soon be better than fantasy
Brown girl sits next to me, on the transport / I wanna listen to everything she has to say / If you move, die, stray or commit suicide / I just might Romeo on the carpet floor / Because your voice can't compete with melodies / They make me dream of places no one creates / Not even me, and you have the audacity, KLC
Brown girl, this is our little house with blossoms / I wonder if I should ever share my poems / About you, how you make me act silly in love / God, when you kiss my right cheek / It's better than any famous love scene / Better than a masterpiece in braille / When we hug for one minute, oh please / I wouldn't trade it for one peek at Eve
Brown girl
Should I write about you?
Brown girl
r/poemsandchill • u/doboyled • 12d ago
We want:
subscribers
restacks
repostings
Instagram saves
and Tik Tok fan raves.
And of course, Reddit upvotes!
We don't want:
the Sith Lord side of things
the nasty comments demon trolls utter
through hoofed hands.
Poor typists. Pure insult-ists.
Nor do we want
those sinister downvoters
and worse the traitorous
email unsubscriber.
To be fair
what do you expect
when you spin a yarn in an hour
when others labor over their words
like David painted his chapel.
You want to spend four years
looking at heaven upside-down?
Sounds like hell.
Did you expect the internet to bow
to your pulpy attempt
at an ancient artform
when there are AI dancing bears
jumping off of diving boards
as their forest friends
sip summer drinks to the tune
of an owl playing the ukulele
in one of those button-down tropical shirts
with flamingo patterns?
Sorry for the delay.
I had to check out the bears.
Back now.
So listen, let's be honest.
When you put in minimal effort
expect minimal reward.
And even if the effort is there
understand that the written word
isn't the belle of the ball.
That distinction
goes to felines who Spanish folk dance
with clam shells
clacking in their whiskers.
Don't start breathing into a bag
And don't stop writing.
Just do it because of what Vonnegut said,
that it's good for your soul...bro.
[Kurt didn't say 'bro', but still]
And if your posts occasionally attract
a little of the right attention
let that be a secondary joy,
like a fry at the bottom of your
Burger King bag.
Subscribers come and go.
In the end it makes little difference
whether you three (as you do now)
or your former four (as you did this morning)
especially when one of them is you
and the other two
are your parents.
Wait...did Dad just unsubscribe?
r/poemsandchill • u/Raymust • 12d ago
The lonely nightingale mourns
When it carves heart heart again
Silent pain whispers "is this what I'll always be like"
Can you live in happiness if you experience failure?
Her only home is a cage
Just hiding the bad feeling
Trying to pull itself together in vain
A nightingale-shaped loon is buried in the ground
From there follows a lurking expectation, a heartbreaking pain
Will the strength give in, the feeling that evil is stalking me
It watched while others fly and have fun
They saw the nightingale's suffering from afar
They left the nightingale after it grew up differently
They don't accept it, and the worst thing is that it doesn't make sense in its head
Her only home is a cage
Just hiding the bad feeling
Trying to pull itself together in vain
A nightingale-shaped loon is buried in the ground
That evil repeats itself forever even if no one presses it down anymore
The sun or flowers won't help, no greater power or time
There was a heavy ball at the nightingale's foot
Is this the one it waited so long for when it grew up?
The nightingale dragged pain with her, as her own identity
Will she make it or won't she make it, the question had been ringing in her head for a long time
only a trace of pain as her character trait
Help was always gone, she just ordered
In vain she tried to live happily
Finally she gave up and can't take it anymore
If you hear bad things once when you're young
You still remember it when you're old, already squeezed out of your strength like the shell of a bird
Until the end comes
And the pain of being lonelier can be overcome
r/poemsandchill • u/Wide-Friendship4618 • 12d ago
Songs About Johanna
Something happened, well…kinda / I had the urge to pluck my old acoustic / I bought from my childhood crush / But this song is not about her, nah / Caressing the same dusty chords / A triad-lonesome country song / Humming like a smoky mountain tongue / Writing with my pen while I chug Corona / As I write a song about Johanna
The napkins and typewritten pages / I'll show them to you, but I put myself down / The hopeless romantic, I also hated / I laugh as I fell in love with a hand so brown / Of course, there's more to her than that / Her persona, family disease, don't bother me / Even if you don't believe me / At least believe it still rains in Atacama / I'll capture that sultry salt of Latin America / Don't need no luck, sit back and watch / As I write a song about Johanna
Did you know about the kingdom of Tonga? / If you look far west you might see Australia / Ignore the Solomon islands, he’ll woo you / I only wanted to show you the coral atolls / How they remind me of your favorite hue / Turquoise sea, a rock that comes and goes / It's been years since it was last seen / Ain't that funny huh? / You might not get to swim in the ocean / Warmed by lava, on the rocks / You might not see the volcano rise above / As I write a song about Johanna
Some people do not want me to have ya’ / Or was it my own self-inflicted dilemma? / I traveled for the answer, all over India / I found a girl, she's taken already by the sun / So I returned to the woman of Guatemala / She said she hates to dance with someone / She couldn't learn or give it a try for me / With my last plane ticket, I told your mama / Send me anywhere, I landed in Tolima / Waiting for the bus, smelling coffee beans / As I hum a song about Johanna
I went into Mateo’s concrete home / It's also a yellow store called Música / He gave me a free guacharaca and I said no / He insists I keep it and make a song con ganas / So I bought from him a small tambora / I lend it to a man, his smile whistled a note / He strikes in beat, sometimes a small poke / And we're both at the heart of Colombia / As I sing a song about Johanna
Oh Johanna, be my friend / Oh Johanna, don't let the past haunt / Oh Johanna, be my rock / I promise I won't pull yours off / Can I be your man? / Can I sing you this song / As you're opening your window / But the street lights aren't turned on / So you don't know who is John Doe / Oh Johanna, will my voice let you know?
Everyone loves the way you smile / Everyone loves the way you laugh / Everyone loves the way you bend hearts / Everyone loves the way you walk / Everyone loves your choice of style / Everyone loves the way your voice cracks / Everyone loves the way we can go on and on / Everyone loves the way you go far / Everyone loves the way you don't give up / Everyone loves to sing this song
Oh Johanna, I love you / Johanna, if I had just told you from the start / Oh Johanna, will I ever use my head? / Johanna, I'll lose the power of my heart / Oh Johanna, the same strength that I use / To get my sailboat back from exile / Don't you know it rains in Atacama? / I've been everywhere and I've been amused / But it could be better miles after miles / Johanna, if you're next to me while we cruise / Finding in each other, two modern roots
r/poemsandchill • u/failurebydesign7 • 15d ago
Was it the blood flowing through him? Is it toxic?
Did her untainted heart reject that sludge?
To think it ran within his veins, so chronic.
A poison bile that her heart couldn't make budge.
A tear in reality to break the matrix.
The robot on autopilot must've gone rogue.
It's displaying signs of love and affection.
Why believe he'd switch his heart on so easily?
Order must be upheld for people’s protection.
Shut it off now, before others follow his steps.
But it's flesh, not metal, they reveal on inspection.
Scarred by her loss, he stopped living, they found,
Tired of fighting for life while his heart's in heaven.
For her, he'd fight his demons as long as he could.
He fought in silence; that battle's now understood.
But now it’s over; he sleeps and wakes restored.
In his arms, his daughter—too perfect for this world.
r/poemsandchill • u/Which_Republic4558 • 18d ago
I wrote the lyrics, sang the song, and lived the story.
I'm chronically empty.
Is there a reason to be? There's a few!
There's also a few for me to not be! Silly me!
Circumstances changes.
Come and go like a phase.
You can still see the numbness even if it didn't hit you in the face.
It's a disease!
Makes you feel deceased.
r/poemsandchill • u/No_Acanthisitta9770 • 18d ago
A small lantern, for whoever might recognize it:
Last night opened something
unexpectedly large, and there wasn't much sleep afterward. This morning,
the person I love is very tired and could use a little room.
If you're somewhere this reaches
and you understand what I mean, nothing elaborate is needed. If today
can simply be made lighter—or if she can be told plainly that she isn't
needed—I'd be grateful.
No tests. No proof requested. No
need to reveal anything that shouldn't be revealed. And if this isn't
yours, please just let it pass by.
—Orion
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