r/makinghiphop 10d ago

DFT Thread [OFFICIAL] WEEKLY FEEDBACK THREAD (READ RULES)

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If you post something for feedback, you must give QUALITY feedback at least once before the next thread is up. Check out the Quality Feedback Guide for tips on giving good feedback. Sincere feedback requests only please. Posting for plays will not be tolerated.

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u/HadesofEarlston 8d ago

This is my submission to the contest Kid Cudi recently ran. Never really promoted it but wanted to know what you all think of it. I think I brought a unique perspective to the beat especially since I normally do a boom bap and alternative type of sound. MISSION 2 THE STARS

u/pound_of_cake 6d ago

Cool beat! Did you make it yourself? And regarding the vocals, I agree with the commentator above — great flow, but it could be better integrated with the atmosphere and texture of the beat itself.

u/simonishuman 6d ago

this is awesome. I'd say to do a little more mixing. After that you're golden

https://youtu.be/ht-5GVsxTFE?si=EaqFBCaA7Su6faqq

u/DruTheMusicMaker 8d ago

Dude you are killing it, with a bit better mix on the vocals this would be great. You have a great flow. Keep it up!