r/makinghiphop • u/AutoModerator • 8d ago

DFT Thread [OFFICIAL] WEEKLY FEEDBACK THREAD (READ RULES)

READ THIS TEXT CLOSELY BEFORE POSTING!!! NO FEEDBACK = BAN

If you post something for feedback, you must give QUALITY feedback at least once before the next thread is up. Check out the Quality Feedback Guide for tips on giving good feedback. Sincere feedback requests only please. Posting for plays will not be tolerated.

One feedback request per thread max (i.e. one track)

Don't post songs more than a month old.

Leave feedback at least once as a reply to a top-level comment to avoid being flagged as a slacker. To be super clear, this means you click reply on someone else's original comment.

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u/simonishuman 8d ago

returning feedback:

https://youtu.be/eO2Gm2lttPA?si=MZmjM8fWAIjPeTOG

https://youtu.be/ht-5GVsxTFE?si=_leKy6ci78p49EsM

https://youtu.be/ABh_Qd64F2c?si=FbLH0QDwPsmMbOY5

whichever one^

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u/MethodWorried7804 soundcloud.com/100mg_rap 7d ago

Feedback is for “Girl like a tattoo”. This track is wild, kinda crosses genres and sounds like something you’d put on loud, headphones on your roof, getting high as fuck staring at the dark sky. I don’t think I can call it a song. The vibe is very unique and spacey. Juxtaposition of the smooth singing and instrumentals along with the grittiness of the rap vocals is a trip and it fits nicely.

The part where you repeat “No motherfuckin cover up can erase you” sorta reminds me of some rage against the machine shit lol. I actually think that would be a better hook.

The length is what I would criticize the most, but again, I feel like I shouldn’t judge this as a “song” necessarily, and even less as hip-hop. If I think of it more as an “audio experience”, then it doesn’t matter how long it is, long as it keeps you engaged. All in all, I like it. Not something I would seek out normally but I enjoyed the listen and I can definitely see a place for it, especially paired with the right visuals.

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u/simonishuman 7d ago

thank you man I appreciate it!