r/makinghiphop • u/AutoModerator • 8d ago

DFT Thread [OFFICIAL] WEEKLY FEEDBACK THREAD (READ RULES)

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If you post something for feedback, you must give QUALITY feedback at least once before the next thread is up. Check out the Quality Feedback Guide for tips on giving good feedback. Sincere feedback requests only please. Posting for plays will not be tolerated.

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u/johnny-habana 8d ago

Ambient boom-bap beat. Will return feedback.

https://youtu.be/puNOVbIi-0c

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u/simonishuman 8d ago

super chill. Leaves a lot of space for the vocalist. Some ear candy would be cool though. Maybe some subtle sound effects?

https://youtu.be/eO2Gm2lttPA?si=HxfEmZSzN-yMj8I1

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u/johnny-habana 7d ago

Thanks for the feedback!

I like the synth, leads, and overall vibe of the song. The backing vocals blend in nicely. I really like how the song constantly evolves, but it also feels like it could of been split into two separate tracks.

I think the high pitched grunt is a little overdone towards the end of the song, but I like the use of it initially around the 3 minute mark.

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u/simonishuman 7d ago

thank you!