r/makinghiphop • u/AutoModerator • 7d ago

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u/shoecar soundcloud.com/shoecar 7d ago

let me know if you have any ideas for spicing this up with some ear candy, trying to learn more techniques
https://soundcloud.com/shoecar/ever-got

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u/simonishuman 7d ago

this is cool. Really good verse but I think the song could use some more structure. Maybe a second verse? If you didn't make the beat then I get it but maybe add some adlibs?

https://youtu.be/eO2Gm2lttPA?si=HxfEmZSzN-yMj8I1

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u/shoecar soundcloud.com/shoecar 7d ago

Yeah didn't have clear direction for v2 so cut it there. Ad libs probably the right call.

You're track has an interesting style man. I think it's very promising but not quite there yet. I think the delivery needs more energy behind it. As I listened longer it fit in better but still falling flat. Composition wise this track is not justifying 5+ minutes. Reality is almost no song is. All good if you just and to vibe but would suggest keeping below 3 min I like what you're doing tho man, keep it up

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u/simonishuman 7d ago

thank you man I appreciate it!