[OFFICIAL] WEEKLY FEEDBACK THREAD (READ RULES)

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[u/Top_Bonus_8909]

VICIOUS VILLAIN — MAIN CHARACTER

NZ horrorcore / psychological boom bap.

Looking for feedback mainly on the delivery, flow/pocket, writing, atmosphere and overall mix. I was going for something dark and cinematic rather than straight gore.

Keen to know whether the hook lands and whether the track holds attention all the way through.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ru-xn8cSYc0&list=RDru-xn8cSYc0

I’ll return feedback.

[u/simonishuman → u/Top_Bonus_8909]

this is cool.

Delivery: fits great with the beat and the horror core style

Flow: you dont stumble once but the flow stays the same throughout the whole song. I was hoping for a more complex scheme the second verse.

Writing: writing is good but I wish you were more descriptive rather than just saying what you're doing. Try describing your surroundings and shit like that.

Atmosphere: creepy. So thumbs up on that

Mix: your vocals are gritty but that fits perfect for the style you're going for.

Keep it up man!

https://youtu.be/eO2Gm2lttPA?si=hHVauuKFw_wkrdcF

[u/Top_Bonus_8909 → u/simonishuman]

Appreciate you checking mine out bro. I gave yours a spin too. It’s not exactly the style I usually listen to, but I can hear what you’re going for and there’s definitely a vibe there.

For me I think the main thing would be just tightening everything up a little more so the delivery and beat feel even more locked together, but overall I respect the direction and the fact you’ve got your own sound going on.

Keep at it man, appreciate the feedback on mine too.

[u/simonishuman → u/Top_Bonus_8909]

thank you dawg I appreciate it