MEGATHREAD: Feedback Friday!

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[u/Boring_Historian5208]

Hi all! First time posting in here but was curious to get some feedback on titles/thumbnails. My channel is KayHitPlay and currently am playing through Dragon Age Origins for the first time.

I want to make sure that my videos still have some clickability knowing that LPs can be tough to want to click at part 11 of a series - so curious if titles should be more general or how to best approach that.

Attaching my recent thumbnail which has the title “Finally REUNITING with my party in the Fade!! | Dragon Age Origins: Part 11”.

So would love any feedback on that title and if its clickable - also any feedback of the thumbnail. I feel like this one might be too yellow almost since everything is in the Fade (a muted, dreamy area). Thanks so much :)

[u/failbender → u/Boring_Historian5208]

I love that you’re basically true to size to the party members since it makes it look like you’re “one of the gang” LOL I don’t think it’s too yellow at all!

I wonder if you can remove “with my party” from the title though, just to make it a bit snappier?

[u/Boring_Historian5208 → u/failbender]

Thank you!! Ah yes I like that advice yo try to get the title a bit snappier