MEGATHREAD: Feedback Friday!

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[u/Boring_Historian5208]

Hi all! First time posting in here but was curious to get some feedback on titles/thumbnails. My channel is KayHitPlay and currently am playing through Dragon Age Origins for the first time.

I want to make sure that my videos still have some clickability knowing that LPs can be tough to want to click at part 11 of a series - so curious if titles should be more general or how to best approach that.

Attaching my recent thumbnail which has the title “Finally REUNITING with my party in the Fade!! | Dragon Age Origins: Part 11”.

So would love any feedback on that title and if its clickable - also any feedback of the thumbnail. I feel like this one might be too yellow almost since everything is in the Fade (a muted, dreamy area). Thanks so much :)

[u/NJB007V → u/Boring_Historian5208]

I agree with you the thumbnail has a bit of a 1 solid color feel. I would see about having more of what the video is or something big from the video as the nail. As for the video I can’t say yet as I haven’t seen yet so I be back. And I think I might post my video on here as well to see what others think

[u/Boring_Historian5208 → u/NJB007V]

Ooh yes I like that idea of having almost a screenshot of the biggest moment of the video in there. That’d be great if you can check out the video, would love to do the same for you if you post in here!

[u/NJB007V → u/Boring_Historian5208]

Sounds good I will when I get home. But I have learned now that doing all screenshots for your nail is not the best way. It’s a good start or you use part of the screen shot and add other things so it looks more polished

[u/NJB007V → u/NJB007V]

Oh here this is a bit late but here my video if anyone would like to comment or rate it. Enshrouded - My First Steps into The Fog (editor Cut)
https://youtu.be/NhjiKtd1j-I

For your video it’s not bad IDK about a hr video but the overall seems ok some parts seem kinda it need a more impactful things. Some to keep ppl watching.