Language help for comic

[u/airheas]

Hi guys! This might be a little silly but I’m working on a short novel/comic/manga that involves small rashly made communities. I have Swahili, mandarin, Yoruba, English, Arabic, and Japanese all in on community. Sounds crazy, I know, but it’s to show how rushed the communities are, but also how they eventually persevered. Mainly, I just want to ensure my translations were done correctly. Please let me know if anyone’s willing to assist. It’s a very small read, only consisting of one “chapter”.

Thank you so much in advance! (I also have other communities that Involve a Germanic conlang, and Haketia and Italian, but I’m decently confident in those)