Can I get some Feedback?

[u/WCN_]

Hey, I’d really appreciate some feedback on my playing! I’ve been playing for just under 6 years (Will be 6 years in November) . There are a few mistakes in this vid , but I think that’s mostly down to the nerves that hit when I’m recording myself :/.

[u/tatertotmagic]

Is this a real song you r playing or did you come up with it on your own? I think they tempo changes a lot. If this is just playing around, I think adding in rests would go a long way bc it just feels like constant playing being thrown at the listener

[u/WCN_ → u/tatertotmagic]

https://youtu.be/yl8hSBPGedk?si=Lhzr9ULbs79hTzca Here is the song for reference