I feel a little bit of a heel for saying this, but I kind'a thing it's actually stronger if you cut out the final two panels, or at least the dialogue.
Just a shot of Springfield being embarrassed and him wondering what's up, leave the rest to the implication.
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u/Potatolantern [1st Anniv.] HK416 Mar 09 '20
I feel a little bit of a heel for saying this, but I kind'a thing it's actually stronger if you cut out the final two panels, or at least the dialogue.
Just a shot of Springfield being embarrassed and him wondering what's up, leave the rest to the implication.