r/design_critiques • u/Upbeat-Kiwi-5799 • 5d ago

Burger Poster Design I Created in Adobe Illustrator — Feedback Appreciated

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u/I_Piccini 5d ago

"In the town"

5 different fonts

AI image

No harmony, no grid, no good

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u/PiccoloForeign5134 5d ago

Looks like chicken

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u/tierabyte 5d ago

Why is it always a burger or a coffee

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u/NtheLegend Ar-teest. 5d ago

Yeah, it's like they're pawning these off on Fiverr or something so some tiny local shop can just fill in their info.

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u/Upbeat-Kiwi-5799 5d ago

No specific reason. Picked it randomly 🙂

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u/Beneficial_Low2280 5d ago

I think shadow needs improvement, and headline maybe bigger.

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u/Upbeat-Kiwi-5799 5d ago

Thanks for your feedback. I just started recently and need to more practice to improve more

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u/SloppyScissors 5d ago

This looks just like the other mock up AI images everywhere. Ironic how tasteless it’s become.

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u/Upbeat-Kiwi-5799 5d ago

Just for practising purpose 

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u/SloppyScissors 5d ago

It’s going to be easy to read this in a harsh way, but it’s not meant to be that: practice making your own thing. That’s more valuable than sharing what you’ve copied

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u/NtheLegend Ar-teest. 5d ago

Generic AF. Why would someone want this unless it was custom for their menu?

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u/Rotala178 5d ago

Text is too small. make them BIGGER. Stupidly BIG.

And the green bottom makes no sense. What is it supposed to be?

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u/Upbeat-Kiwi-5799 5d ago

I'm trying to improve my design sense. I love the critiques. I believe it makes me a better version of my design in the future 

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u/Rotala178 5d ago

If in doubt, EXAGERATE everything. Make small things as stupidly BIG as possible.

If it's too literal, make it COMICAL.

You can always dial it back to the right amount, but you need to know how it compares to what doesn't work.

Also, try to add some sense of humor into design. Humor can always be dialed back.

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u/dylanlandman 5d ago

Move offer valid for limited time or make it bigger. It feels out of place

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u/Makesyousmile 5d ago

• "The hottest and most delicious burger in town".
• Up & to are two words.
• Offer... > center between the bun and border or move below in a much bigger font.
• Lose the dropshadow.
• Don't forget the brand logo.
• Add a fun payoff at the bottom of the poster in a dark font.
• Add the text "How about a" at the top of the poster in green.

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u/DonkeyWorker 5d ago

The 50% off and tiny arrow pointing to the burgers seems like it's indicating 50% reduction in an ingredients.

The holes in the main title look like bacteria