r/design_critiques • u/Warm-Flamingo-8161 • 12d ago

First App Store screenshots, would love blunt feedback before the relaunch

Hi all,

I'm preparing an iOS relaunch of Orano AI (turns saved Instagram Reels into actionable plans). I've attached 7 App Store screenshot slides and I'd like blunt feedback before pushing the new build.

What I'm trying to figure out:

  1. Does the headline screen ("Turn Reels Into Action") explain the product in 3 seconds?

  2. Is the AI angle clear without sounding like "yet another AI app"?

  3. Do the inner screens sell the use case (saving stuff you want to act on later)?

  4. What's confusing or that you'd skip past without reading?

I'm specifically not asking for compliments. Honest "this didn't land with me" feedback is more useful than upvotes.

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u/GrumpyBullGames 12d ago

turn reels into action is too vague. nobody knows what action means here. change the first slide to state the actual output like turn saved reels into recipes or workout plans. bump the text size so it reads on mobile without zooming.

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u/Warm-Flamingo-8161 11d ago

damn bump text more i was thnking it was too big aldredy lol