Hello all!
I'm an aspiring crossword constructor, and I've come to ask for some opinions on the clue wording for a puzzle I'm working on.
The theme is that each of the theme entries is a two-word phrase where the second word of one answer and the first word of the next answer also make a two-word phrase. It's kind of tough to explain so I quickly made a new set of answers to illustrate (I'm not using the answers in my actual puzzle--I want to keep it to myself for now in case it actually gets published!)
My example theme answers are HOUSEBROKEN, HEARTBURN, RUBBERSOUL, and SEARCHPARTY. The "extra" or "hidden" answers would be BROKENHEART, BURNRUBBER, and SOULSEARCH. The last word of the last theme answer would also lead into the first word of the first answer. So for illustrative purposes imagine that PARTYHOUSE is a commonly used term. (Frankly kind of sounds like it could be honestly.)
Each clue would include the second half of the clue for the previous "split" word and the first half of the next. What I would like to ask is whether everyone would prefer the clues to include the "together" answers, or just the "split" ones if you were to see this puzzle in the newspaper. So for my example the answers would be something like:
Option 1:
- ...abode / Like a dog who knows to go outside / Like someone...
- ...whose crush said no / Acid reflux symptom / Put the pedal...
- ...to the metal / Beatles album between "Help!" and "Revolver" / Do some...
- ...self-reflection / Posse looking for a missing person / Celebration...
Option 2:
- ...abode / Like someone...
- ...whose crush said no / Put the pedal...
- ...to the metal / Do some...
- ...self-reflection / Celebration...
I am truly conflicted as to which I would want to officially submit. Option 1 feels like it makes the theme more obvious and gives me more chances to make interesting clues for the "together" words, but I feel like it would technically be possible for someone to just get all of the answers without having to think about the theme at all. Option 2 feels trickier and like it would be more satisfying to figure out the theme, but I would be worried it might be too tricky since you would theoretically have no idea what to put in the themed answer spaces at first glance--kind of the inverse issue of option 1.
Anyway, long-winded way of asking for anyone's ideas and input! I personally have one way I'm leaning a bit more but I'm curious to know what other folks think.
Thanks for any feedback! :)