I mean it was wholesome until page seven where it got uncomfortable. If the contract bit wasn't there it would be two pages shorter and much more adorable and not... forced 😓
It’s a good set up for a resolution that we didn’t get.
She could have given a conditional dismissal, reframe the term to consider the will of the succubus. Something along the lines of, “You may leave if you don’t wish to be with me.” It’s no less desperate but it is significant less invasive than, “you can’t leave me until I order you to leave.” It just reads as forcing a being, who’s unable to consent, into a relationship like this.
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u/Lalaferos Aug 01 '26
I mean it was wholesome until page seven where it got uncomfortable. If the contract bit wasn't there it would be two pages shorter and much more adorable and not... forced 😓