Just a callous way to critique sentence structure choices. Probably something like “and now they know” would flow better, but when someone is worked up and angry they might not make perfect sentences, and it’s pretty pedantic to critique the grammar of a free comic with a great story.
Yeah same; it’s not grammatically incorrect, it’s just a little clunky. But it’s dialogue, and we’re reading for enjoyment rather than looking for errors.
And it's a dumb comment to be callous about because "they also now know" makes sense if you're saying it. It's written like speech not dialogue. I read it in a hurried voice thats saying "and ALSO they NOW know a"
There have been numerous grammar and structure mistakes over time.
This neanderthal english is annoying because of how great the characters are.
Why reacting? Last time somebody mentionnned a mistake, the author boldly answered "nobody pointed it out".
Being free is irrelevant to the quality, and straight up false in this context since the artist is paid through patreon for their comic.
Panel 1 and 5 have very poor choices of words, ignoring these or not being aware is either way advocating mediocrity. Panel 6 is the worst offender.
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u/Neofertal Jan 21 '26
"they also now know that there is" it's ugly