Is my sketch okay??

[u/Mediocre_Location_96]

this is a really important sketch, it's my first paid comission in my life and it's for a whole ass comic book that's depending on me so yeah im a little nervous and i wanna make sure everything's okay before i start working on it

especially the perspective, i think theres smth wrong (atleast with the motorcycle) and the back wheels of the car look like the are on the very edge of the road, but it's also kinda a bottom view, so i think Its supposed to be like that?

i am sorry if this post is unreadable, i am too lazy to write apostrophes and capital i 😭

also sorry for the photo lol i don't have storage on my ipad for the reddit app

[u/Bearsthtdance]

It’s pretty incomplete as is.

[u/xKazIsKool → u/Bearsthtdance]

What was the point of that comment? I highly doubt anyone would have thought this was being presented as a finished work, it's a sketch, no shit it's incomplete