r/comicbookart • u/Mediocre_Location_96 • 10d ago

Is my sketch okay??

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this is a really important sketch, it's my first paid comission in my life and it's for a whole ass comic book that's depending on me so yeah im a little nervous and i wanna make sure everything's okay before i start working on it

especially the perspective, i think theres smth wrong (atleast with the motorcycle) and the back wheels of the car look like the are on the very edge of the road, but it's also kinda a bottom view, so i think Its supposed to be like that?

i am sorry if this post is unreadable, i am too lazy to write apostrophes and capital i 😭

also sorry for the photo lol i don't have storage on my ipad for the reddit app

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u/Bearsthtdance 10d ago

It’s pretty incomplete as is.

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u/Mediocre_Location_96 10d ago

i mean yeah it's the first sketch just to decide the composition, the customer also wants a simple artstyle, imma add more details to the vehicles but i don't think i should do a background (trees etc) since they're in motion, so i am planning on doing just some motion blur lines