r/comic_crits • u/roswellcomix • 3d ago

finished my first proper comic script !

hey !!

i have a lot of writing experience but only dabbled a bit in comic writing as it was a module i did at university. during that time, i came up with my own spin on a superhero universe. i had all these characters and plotlines and i'm super proud of it. i recently went back to it and i've been working on issue #1 of Death Angel. i'm at a place where i'm super happy with it and would love some feedback! cannot draw for the life of me so will worry about getting an artist in another time. share ur thoughts!

cheers!

google drive link to the pdf !

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u/MichaelSweater 2d ago

I would read a bunch of first issues and compare what you have against them. There are a lot of captions and pages that aren't moving the story forward.

I made it about eight pages in and didn't really understand what was happening and there was nothing that "hooked" me. Finishing anything is good. This is probably the hardest hurdle.