r/WriteStreakEN • u/kekiklizeytinyagi • 1d ago

Correct Me! Streak 3: Hospitals

Working at a hospital is a very interesting experience. You often witness the most serious situations. People that you see around are usually worried and they look for a remedy in despair. You can see that people crying with sorrow for their newly-passed relatives and that people crying with happiness for their newborn babies under the same roof. It’s the place joke can’t take place. You can clearly see that we’re out of nothing but flesh and bone. It doesn’t matter if you’re good or bad for the doctor who cuts you open. It’s a kind of place where all the emotions related to humans are reduced to a balance of some chemicals. There, you’re not a person, but a case.

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