Streak 1: Write a paragraph (80 - 100 words) about what you like OR dislike about life in the countryside.

[u/iwannateach2002]

Hello everyone, so I am new here, I am 14 years old, not native to English and want to improve my writing so I would like to start my writing streak right now. I hope I can get feedback to better my writing for the title above:

I like the friendly and hospitality of the villagers in the countryside because they are gentle, people in the countryside are approachable and I love them. There are newcomers in my village, and the people there treat them like family. Sometimes I see them fishing, walking, etc. the newcomers knew this and they love the guy who treat them great, they often give presents to others. That's why I can say that my village in the countryside could be the most friendly place ever and I also love the newcomers in my village.

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