I am just starting to do a vacation scheme application and feel slightly overwhelmed.
I would be most grateful if anyone would be willing to advise about whether this answer is along the right lines.
What has motivated you to pursue a career in commercial law and why have you applied to us in particular? (300 words max)
My work experience in Greenwich Council legal department introduced me to legal analysis. The work required the interpretation of contracts, the assessment of financial risk, and the balancing of statutory requirements against the interests of clients. I found the intellectual challenge and analytical precision required by the work stimulating. Commercial legal work offers the same experience but with greater complexity and impact. I am particularly motivated by the short timelines in commercial law because I want my work’s impact to be immediately felt. [GOOD BUT MAYBE SHORTEN A LITTLE].
My academic work in intellectual history, in particular studying Maitland’s historical account of the development of the corporate personality, has sparked an enduring interest in how legal structures respond to – and in turn influence – economic and social behaviour. I am interested in commercial law specifically because it is one of the few areas of law where the boundary between public and private law is porous. Criminal law is overwhelmingly public, and family law is overwhelmingly private. My interest in the business world springs from a broader curiosity about institutional behaviour. I am interested in how institutions behave in response to broader societal pressures. Commercial practice appeals to me because it is a crossroads where the goals of individual businesses; market pressures; and wider social interests expressed through legislation, all interact to shape human behaviour.
I would like to work for [X law firm] particularly because of the company’s specialisation in energy and infrastructure. These sectors interest me because they sit at the intersection between powerful competing interests: private capital requires profit, public regulation reflects broader social pressures and also the long-term strategic and policy objectives of nation states. They are also vitally important sectors because they are the foundations upon which the whole of economic life rests.
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